Tuesday, June 30, 2015

3 Things I Love in a Good Story // Heidi

Welcome to our new monthly series—3 Things I Love in a Good Story! I decided to post this first month myself to help give an idea of what we’ll be doing, but I’m looking forward to all your eager participation in the coming months!

In short, I’ll be highlighting a guest post here each month sharing (in about 500 words or less) three of the things you love in a well told story. (And notice I said it’s three OF.) There are probably dozens of things you love—and whatever three you choose may not even be the biggest—so your selections could range from plot similarities (i.e. “I like a lot of action in the climax”) to a good dose of humor to certain character qualities in the protagonist. When it comes to good story, the sky’s the limit! 

I think this promises to be great fun and, of course, all your feedback will help any of us writer types out there as well. ;) 

One last thing: the three points can also be from both literature and film—though obviously, some will tend more towards one or the other. 

And now without more ado… 

from Heidi


1 – Balanced description 


Not huge, easy-to-skip blocks of text, but vivid turns of phrase regularly and beautifully punctuating action and dialogue. Sometimes lyrical, oft times keen and hard-edged, it’s description taking its brilliance from the mind of the writer. Words flashing light on a new angle of a rare jewel—bringing forth meaning entirely fresh—or words highlighting something familiar fashioned anew, shaken and turned inside out and upside down to show the still solid green strength at its core. 


2 – A strong ending 


I love it when a story feels like it’s working toward the ending the entire time—every subplot has a part to play and every character has a pivotal role. But more than that I want to feel that deep rightness where everything has been fully culminated—the ah ha! moment with the ending pulling together all the deep threads, some of which I may not even have seen (or may not notice until the third or fourth or fifth time reading or viewing it). This means I don’t really like important characters popping in during the second half of the story, etc. If they’re going to have a pivotal role I like them at least foreshadowed or mentioned or hinted at much earlier on. Once the conflict is resolved I also like the ending to follow fairly quickly. Not slam bang, but without tacking on a few extra chapters of potential doubts and indecisions for the main characters. 

And also—the last line. It’s vital. 

3 – Good camaraderie 


Trying to pick and choose what to highlight for my third point, this one struck me and I was surprised to realize just how many of my favorite stories (in book and film) have this characteristic. It’s camaraderie as in the deep friendship and loyalty of a Jonathan and David. For a few examples: 

Two brothers forming a close kinship bond (Shadow on the Mesa

Two erstwhile enemies building a friendship (North & South

Shipmates working together (The Buccaneers

A loyal servant loving, laughing with, and trusting his master—with each willing to give their life for the other (Zorro

It’s even present in well done romantic relationships! In this case it’s not always easily detectable as “camaraderie,” though sometimes it is (think Frozen and Tangled and Jane Eyre and Austen’s Emma), but it’s that tie that pulls the man and woman together under similarities and despite differences. 


It’s a part of the genuine foundation of the friendship underlying a healthy romantic love whether or not (given the particular story) that friendship comes before or after the falling in love.

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So there you have three of my favorite elements! Would you like to share three of yours in a guest post? And you don’t have to be a writer to qualify! This series is by story lovers for story lovers. So don’t be shy. I’d love to have you!



Heidi Peterson is a lover of wide-spreading land, summer dust, white pounding waterfalls, and mountain tops; also of good dark coffee and rich stories. Most of all she's a lover of the One who is the Word, the Word made flesh. You can visit her additional blog (where she shares more about books, movies, and further marvels of life) at: Along the Brandywine.

Visit and contact at: Sharing the Journey // Along the Brandywine // ladyofanorien(at)gmail(dot)com

Tuesday, June 23, 2015

Inklings & A New Blog Series!


A quick reminder that the Inklings link-up is still happily open for entries through the 30th. If you can, do jump in and join us! Also, I'm planning to start yet another monthly blog series here soon so stay tuned for further exciting developments! ;)

I hope you're all having a lovely Tuesday!


Heidi Peterson is a lover of wide-spreading land, summer dust, white pounding waterfalls, and mountain tops; also of good dark coffee and rich stories. Most of all she's a lover of the One who is the Word, the Word made flesh. You can visit her additional blog (where she shares more about books, movies, and further marvels of life) at: Along the Brandywine.

Visit and contact at: Sharing the Journey // Along the Brandywine // ladyofanorien(at)gmail(dot)com

Monday, June 8, 2015

Inkling Explorations Link-up // June 2015


Inkling Explorations is an exciting link-up for any and all story lovers who love discovering treasures in everything they read—whether it's in an old favorite or something crisply and deliciously new on the shelf.

It's completely optional (you can enter some months and not in others) and it's open to entries from literature and film—and with selections from fiction, historical fiction, fantasy, romance, action, poetry, even sometimes non-fiction! The range is pretty much limitless. (Note: Entries will be moderated, however, and must be clean, edifying, and suitable for all ages.)

*Rules*


1. Post the Inklings button on your sidebar.
2. Do a post on your own blog relating to the month's selection/subject (a literary excerpt as short or as long as you like AND/OR—if specified that month—a screencap from a film with an explanation of how the scene builds/develops the story). Link back here somewhere in your post.
3. Come back here and paste your link in the comments box and I'll add it to the post. Then enjoy visiting and reading everyone else's contributions!

That's all there is to it!

June Topic: A Gripping Story Opening in Literature


(June specific notes: "Gripping" doesn't necessarily mean high action; specifically, it's anything that caught your interest and kept you reading! ;) Also, book selections only this month, i.e. no film entries.)


My entry is from A Sea Queen's Sailing by Charles W. Whistler 


(It might seem cliché here, highlighting a story beginning in the aftermath of a fight, but this opening drew me in so hard I was quite literally eating, sleeping, and breathing the story for several days till I reached the wonderful ending.)


“The black smoke eddied and wavered as it rose over my father’s burning hall, and then the little sea breeze took it and swept it inland over the heath-clad Caithness hills which I loved. Save for that black cloud, the June sky was bright and blue overhead, and in the sunshine one could not see the red tongues of flame that were licking up the last timbers of the house where I was born. Round the walls, beyond reach of smoke and heat, stood the foemen who had wrought the harm, and nearer the great door lay those of our men who had fallen at the first. There were foemen there also, for it had been a good fight.”

Action, reflection, and conflict…


The rest of the story is delightful—tense in places, quite original, and tremendously satisfying. It’s an old book and hard to find, but if you can hunt it down I highly recommend it!

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Now let the fun begin! Entries are open through the end of the month and I can't wait to see your selections!

Up next month: A well crafted animated film climax


Saturday, June 6, 2015

"Beyond the Mask" Now in Theaters!


A quick reminder here with the exciting news that the Burns family's independently produced adventure film, Beyond the Mask, is showing in theaters this week!! It's a great story and (if you haven't already) click here to find it in a theater near you to enjoy the story and support this groundbreaking event!



Heidi Peterson is a lover of wide-spreading land, summer dust, white pounding waterfalls, and mountain tops; also of good dark coffee and rich stories. Most of all she's a lover of the One who is the Word, the Word made flesh. You can visit her additional blog (where she shares more about books, movies, and further marvels of life) at: Along the Brandywine.

Visit and contact at: Sharing the Journey // Along the Brandywine // ladyofanorien(at)gmail(dot)com

Thursday, June 4, 2015

Quote of the Month ~ June 2015

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For more great Quotes of the Month click here.





Heidi Peterson is a lover of wide-spreading land, summer dust, white pounding waterfalls, and mountain tops; also of good dark coffee and rich stories. Most of all she's a lover of the One who is the Word, the Word made flesh. You can visit her additional blog (where she shares more about books, movies, and further marvels of life) at: Along the Brandywine.

Visit and contact at: Sharing the Journey // Along the Brandywine // ladyofanorien(at)gmail(dot)com

Friday, May 29, 2015

Writing Update, Inkling Explorations and Giveaway Winner, and a Link


Hello all! Life has been super busy here, but I've also most happily been able to keep up with David's Shoulders over the last two weeks! After an intense first draft of Chapter 7 (taking about a month to complete) I started Chapter 8 on Monday and actually reached the halfway point yesterday.

Chapter 8 is also embarking us en route back to the west -- this time with our hero firmly (and physically) on board -- hence, it's the perfect time to share another handy link. While I haven't yet fully explored the site, this page is an organized layout of bugle calls used daily (and in action) by the US Cavalry, etc. Ordered from sun-up to sun-down, you can also listen to an example of each. Check it out here and let me know what you think!


And I'm so delighted to have had all your enthusiastic participation in the Inkling Explorations launch this month! Thank you so much everyone!!

Our happy winner of the paperback copy of Greenwillow is: Natalie
(Congratulations, Natalie! :) And I'll be sending you a direct email with the details.)

Remember, the link-up IS still open through the end of the month! The original link post is here.

And have no fear -- the violet subject is not exhausted as there are still at least three Anne of Green Gables/Montgomery quotes (that I can think of). For a teaser: one mentions violets and amethyst during Anne's early days at Green Gables, one uses the description "empurpled" (also during her early days), and one comes from Paul Irving. Have fun guessing and if anyone wants to post them, I'd be thrilled!

Hoping you're having a wonderful Friday!




Heidi Peterson is a lover of wide-spreading land, summer dust, white pounding waterfalls, and mountain tops; also of good dark coffee and rich stories. Most of all she's a lover of the One who is the Word, the Word made flesh. You can visit her additional blog (where she shares more about books, movies, and further marvels of life) at: Along the Brandywine.

Visit and contact at: Sharing the Journey // Along the Brandywine // ladyofanorien(at)gmail(dot)com

Wednesday, May 20, 2015

An Interview with Emma

Today I'm delighted to be interviewing fellow blogging friend and writer, Emma Jane!



Emma Jane Anderson is a young starry-eyed girl who can’t really remember a time when she didn’t have it in her head to be a writer-- it must have been very long ago, she thinks. Her favorite things to do are read romantic novels, sings folk ballads, romp around in meadows full of daisies, watch her favorite movies, and of course, write stories about the lively characters tramping around her imagination. She hasn’t finished any remarkable work of fiction yet, but she has high hopes of writing novels by the dozen someday, and is currently working on her first, Curtains of Lace. She gets awfully excited about things and has resigned herself to the fact that most people are going to think her odd, but in general she has a lot of fun. 


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1. (Heidi) Some differences and similarities you see between the three major forms of storytelling—literature, music, and film? 
(Emma) A good story well-told rings true in any form. I love all three forms, and the different ways they exert the imagination and bring stories to life make the experience of each more enjoyable! I love how books stimulate the imagination, and allow you to come up with your own mental pictures of the characters, the places, and everything, whereas when you watch a movie all that’s already laid out for you, so you come to it with the perspective already drawn. When you watch a movie, though, it’s often much easier to jump right into the story as if you were there, and it’s a whole different experience to watch everything unfold before you rather than reading the words on a page. Both have their merits, and both are awesome. 

As for music, for me that has always played a big part of any movie experience. It adds so much depth and emotion and “scope for the imagination”, if you will. :-D I also love stories told through songs, because that’s putting my two favorite things together-- storytelling and music-- and really, what could be better?


2. How have you seen those three mesh together in your own creative process? 
I always picture my characters and their adventures in my head, sort of like watching a movie, because it helps me to lay it out as I want the reader to see it in their own imagination. Watching movies definitely gives another perspective to writing. I watch a lot of movies (yes, I admit it) and I’ve gotten lots of inspiration from them, a lot of which I incorporate into what I write. 

Music also inspires me. Sometimes I listen to movie soundtracks while I write, but mostly I just have music in my head, whatever’s just right for the particular scene that’s playing out at the moment. Sometimes I’ll hear a folk song that tells a story I find especially intriguing, and it makes me want to write a book about that someday! 

3. When and how did you first begin writing? 
I must have been about seven or eight when I started making up little stories and writing them down in little notebooks. At that time I was heavily inspired by Anne of Green Gables and other stories I’ve been immersed in practically since birth. :-) Most of what I wrote as a youngster bore large traces of My Louisiana Sky, Tales of Avonlea, Little Women, and things like that. I wrote my first ‘book’ when I was about eight, which was inspired by the adventures of the Barbie families my sisters and I played with all the time. 


4. What are you currently working on? 
The biggest thing is a novel I began last June, called Curtains of Lace. I’ve been tinkering with it on-and-off for almost a year now, and I hope to finish the first draft in a few months. I’ve never worked on a project as big as this before, and it’s been terribly exciting, as well as frightfully daunting. I’m making slow progress, though, which is heartening, and I am absolutely in love with my story. It’s the best thing that has ever come out of me. 

Besides that I have a few other little stories I dabble in occasionally, depending on what mood I’m in (which depends on what I’ve been reading/watching, or other outside sources.) One of them is the story of a young debutante in 1790s England, called Haul Away, which I’m also crazy about. I’m pretty crazy about my stories. :-) 

5. Particular author/s who have influenced you? 
Most definitely Lynn Austin, who is my favorite author of all time. I discovered her books (and, coincidentally, the great and glorious world of Christian historical fiction) when I was twelve years old, and my life has never been the same! Also Tasha Tudor, who has always been a big inspiration to me, and Elswyth Thane, my second favorite author, who is the author of my beloved Williamsburg series and is so smart it’s not even fair. 


6. Is there a “non-writing” activity that shapes your writing? 
I often play the piano whenever I get frustrated or tired, or just bored with my writing. The piano bears so much of my pain. ;-D I also occasionally have fun looking at pictures on Pinterest of places and people who inspire my characters and locations. And, of course, reading, which practically goes without saying. 

7. Your opinion on the advantages and disadvantages of digital books? 
I strongly dislike digital books. Actually, I’ve never touched one with a ten-foot pole, but my opinion stands. Personally, I feel it takes away from the thrill and charm of holding the book in your hands, turning the pages, inhaling the scent, tracing the words with your finger. (If you traced the words with your finger on a touchscreen, you’d be in all sorts of trouble.) If I were to give you a brutally honest answer, I’d say, digital books are lame. Just read real books, people. You’re missing something very special if you don’t. 

8. Do you ever do graphic design to help with your writing? 
Not often, though I have made picture collages pertaining to two of my novels, which I’m terribly tickled with. I’d love to do more of it in the future! 

9. Do you outline? If so, in a general way or very detailed? 
I’m terrible when it comes to outlining. In fact, usually when I start out I have little or no outline at all. It comes to me either all at once or slowly by degrees, but usually it does come and I can get away with not planning. Lately, though, working on such a large-scale novel, I’ve learned firsthand the importance of laying out solid plans. You can always change things, but I’m finding it’s good for me to have a course to go by. 


10. Do you work on multiple projects at once? 
Absolutely! I find it tend to get rather bored if I work on only one thing for too long. I’m very scatterbrained. Plus, I’m so changeable in my moods and inspiration that I write better if I have two or three things going that I can alternately work on. 

11. Do you edit as you write? 
Sometimes, though it really depends on what I’m writing. I actually prefer editing to the base writing process, because it’s easier for me to get a picture of what I want it to be when I can stand back a ways and view it as the reader and not the writer. Sometimes I feel like I get too close to my own writing to really pull out the magic I want my readers to experience. 

12. Certain themes you see surfacing and resurfacing in your work? 
Dreams, discontentment versus genuine happiness, family struggles. My heroines tend to be very imaginative, dreamy, and prone to unusual or awkward situations, and their hero is usually much more steady and grounded.


13. A particular aspect of writing you struggle with or a challenge you’ve overcome? 
I’m not the most consistent person in the world-- I have days when I just want to write non-stop, the emotion is flowing from my pen, and I’m ravingly excited about what I’m doing….and other days when I feel kind of lackadaisical about it. I’ve been trying to be more diligent in setting and keeping goals-- because I want to get somewhere, don’t I? ;-D 

I do feel like I’ve overcome a huge challenge with sticking at my novel for so long, though. Right now I’m more than halfway through it, which is farther than I’ve ever gotten with something like this, and it’s been very freeing to know that I CAN actually do this, because I’m actually doing it! It gives a girl hope. 

14. How do you deal with feedback—particularly negative feedback? 
I’ve always been the kind of person who isn’t much concerned with what other people think. Chances are if I’ve written something and I really like it, I’m not going to care if you tell me you don’t. That can be good, but it can also be bad! I don’t get a lot of feedback, because at this point I don’t let many people read my work, and thankfully it hasn’t been very negative yet! While I am inclined to be indifferent to most suggestions, I try to be gracious about it. 

15. One thing you’ve learned from other writers? 
Everyone says ‘keep writing’, which is universally true. Just do it. You’ll never get anywhere if you don’t. Sometimes I read about people finishing books in such a short time, and writing so many, and it makes me feel very small and inadequate and unsuccessful, but I’ve learned not to let it dissuade me. Some people are prolific writers who can whip off novels fast as prairie fire-- I’m can’t. But it doesn’t matter how long it takes me to do something, I’ll just stick to it and eventually I’ll arrive where I’m meant to be. So I guess you could say I’ve learned to be patient. :-) 


16. A helpful nonfiction book or website? 
I don’t really read much about writing (though maybe I should), so I can’t really say. Typically when I see something online about writing tips or such, I just think, oh, I don’t need that, though I’m sure I could probably use it. ;-P 

17. What do you consider one of the single most important things to remember (i.e. an attitude or technique)? 
One thing I’ve been trying to remember lately is not to over-write; say what you want to say, and not what doesn’t need to be said. I have a tendency to cram words, which makes my sentences much too bulky and bothersome. I’m trying to let my writing flow easier and be less bogged down by adjectives. 

Also, let your own unique style lead the flow. Being inspired by other authors is great, and essential, but don’t try to be too much like anyone else when you have your own special talent that needs to shine through. 

18. A word of encouragement for fellow writers? 
Know your stories, and know your characters. Sometimes it takes a long time, but when you can get to know the people you’ve created so well that they become startlingly real, it’s ever so much easier to infuse that into your story. I realize that might sound a little out-there-- I’m a very imaginative person. :-) But it’s something I’ve found to be true. 

Also, don’t let yourself get discouraged. If this is what you love, work at it. Write what you know, what you love, what you hate, what you feel, what you want others to feel. Be genuine, and that will resonate with your reader. And don’t forget why you’re doing it. Give it your all.

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Note from Heidi: Thanks so much for sharing, Emma! It was such a pleasure having you!

Also, you can all visit Emma's lovely blog here at: A Lantern in Her Hand.

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